Reviews for a lovely fool
Isca chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Beautiful imagery!
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
And the last stanza seems to be a confirmation of the previous two. I liked it, it was short and precise, but not cliche. Good job.
sporty southern rockin gal chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
I think it is good, possibly melonchally-maybe the downside to love...pain, regret, uncertainty.
Saranghae chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
This is fair, but I don't think the end of your poem finished it well.