Reviews for The Holy Six: The New Order
black-kat13 chapter 2 . 8/8/2008
o-o sickening, but a gud chapter none the less. that dog reminds meh of the three headed on in Lightning Theif. o.o

b-kat13
NoDelibrateSounds chapter 2 . 8/6/2008
took u forever!-rolls eyes- but still, gud, and I LUV EVIL FLYING MONKEYS!
Ash Algood chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Evil flying monkey's? Hooray! Those r always cool. Hey 4 me a cure 4 writers block is allways listening 2 music nd making scenarios with ur characters. I've made a lot of scenes of Altria nd OHD that way.
Jewria chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Very good...
black-kat13 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
EAT LOTS OF CHOCOLATE! go emily! AH EVIL MOKEYS FROM AUSTRAILIA! OH NO!

b-kat13(it's me, april! :3)
NoDelibrateSounds chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
JAKE! I TOLD U 2 EAT ICE CREAM! GOD,u never listen to me, do you? Well, write or I will kill you. (not literly, but ya know)

sis
Iccle Fairy chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
interesting sounding characters, although I've never been one to outline them before I start...mainly because they change as I write ;) intriguing short summary. erm...for inspiration I've always found reading, listening to music and my photography helps for me...don't know if that helps :p
DigitalScripter chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
I'd add a summary for one. In my opinion these character bio's starting off the story never work well. Let the reader find this information out thoughout the story. Your characters sound interesting so I'll be sure to read chapter one when it comes out.