|Reviews for Peaceful skies|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
A review from the Review Game on its first birthday to thank you for being a part of the community.
"beautiful puffs that you are/so white so pure,"... all of the sudden you used the word you and addressed the clouds as oppossed to just describing them, which confused me. I would start with addressing the clouds instead of starting it halfway through.
In the beginning your descriptions were repetitive and a bit cliched, but I think you really turned it around in the second half. You changed the poem's whole tone and description. It was really interesting.
| fatbird33 chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
oo very peaceful and relaxing...
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
I like the mixing between peaceful imagery and love.