Reviews for Slap in the Face
J.N. Lloyd chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
That is the most interesting haiku that I've ever read! Loved the idea, I don't think I could have ever thought of something like that for a haiku. I really enjoyed the irony. Wonderful work.
lymli chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
it sounds as if you were the lover... anyway, nice haiku.
The Angel in Black chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Wow. That is an amazing poem, actually. The poem itself is like a smack in the face. Very good job.