Reviews for Promise Me
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
You punctuate it perfectly, but because of that it seemed odd that the capitalization wasn't right.

"but you won't ever let me/go,/will you." it should end with a question mark since will you is a question.

I love that last line it was really great. I also like the way you describe your relationship with quotes that's different for poetry. Nicely done.