Reviews for THE LONELY MAN
Anatomical Liberation chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
I really like this! It's very well written.
Sarai Espera chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
really good, i like it a lot
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Although a fairly cute poem, I've got one little niggling I've got to get out.

For i am a beaten...battered...bleeding...dying...fallen tree in a vast open green

should be:

For I am a beaten... battered... bleeding... dying... fallen tree

Sorry! I'm so pedantic, but I can't truly help it.


- Clap Trap