|Reviews for block|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
I like the way you used the personification of "muses." It's quite interesting. Also, the plural of "muses" was interesting. You usually see it refered to as singular by writers.
However, I didn't really like your formatting. I thought the centering was unnecessary. Actually, I couldn't even find the word the first time I read it through ;
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| Midnight In Eden chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
Instead of centering the "touch", simply indenting it would work (though I'm not sure if FP allows it). The centering, for me, is just too much for such a short piece.
Aside from that though I like this piece quite a lot. It's brief but at the same time it says all it needs to. I've been reading a lot of "writer's block" poems lately and this one sticks out. It's not whining about the situation, merely commenting with brevity.
Finally, check out the Review Marathon, it's part of the Review Game - there's a link in my profile. Great way to give and receive reviews.
| lost for words chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
i'm feeling that way right now.
you put it so perfectly.