Reviews for Donald and the Talking Shoe
SolarisOne8 chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Titles aren't my strong suit, either. That's why I take them from songs I hear or shows I watch or other books I read.
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
That was great! I was kind of expecting a surprise ending, but that was a pretty nice idea. And I wouldn't worry too much about the title, it gets the point across and you normally want a simple title for a simple story. GREAT story though!

Write on!
Zonne chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
That was weird - as I assume it was intended to be.

I think overall it was very funny, but I do think Donald should have been quite a bit more shocked. His character seemed to weak when faced with a talking shoe.

I like the way the shoe has a list of demands. Very interesting twist, creates humor and gives the shoe real personality.

I liked the ending best. Donald is a bit smarter than I gave him credit for. Great twist with humor


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dreamforever101 chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
haha thats pretty funny.. :D