|Reviews for No Reasons|
| SEMMU chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Great emotion here. I love the lines:
"Music wafts in gentle drifts up
the wires into waiting ears."
"The tears drip irritatingly from my eyes
falling as depressed clichés."
The coparision of tears to "depressed cliches" is very interesting. Write on!
| Rebecca chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Woot, it's showed ;D Well, naturally, since it's lke 4 am here. Meh. Anyway, I've told you exactly what I think of this one; how it's a bit different from your normal style and that there's a lot of intense lines, such as, "falling as depressed clichés" and "can you break a teardrop?" I like the last line, "I shatter." Keep it up, girly ]
| The Exuberant chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
great poem! i loved the end!
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Can you break a teardrop?…
When you smile at me…
the ending is wonderful.