Reviews for Forbidden Touch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You should REALLY consider updating this phenominal story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haven't updates in a while but i like this and hope you can continue it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa it been long since an update but update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what happened to your story? |
![]() ![]() it's been like a year since you last updated. WHY AREN'T YOU UPDATING?! This is the 2ND time I'm reading your story. UPDATEEEEEEE. |
![]() ![]() patients (patience- the kind you wrote are doctor's patients)I warned you my patients (same thing as before) were thinning looked at him with board eyes (bored) be dinning (dining) in my room tonight Sorry if I am nitpicky. This is very good. |
![]() ![]() Finally it was done! I had cleaned very (every)dorm pined (pinned) me down with my arms above my head You did a nice job of showing his hatred for her. |
![]() ![]() Keep writing more! its really well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is so amazing! :D I can't get over it! Please continue! I love Eva and Alex! ;P |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story but I cant understand the historical background of it. The slavery doesn't go hand in hand with a washing machine and a limo. I don't even know if its supposed to be an alternate reality because you never explain that. Other than that, I do like the story :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Does Eva already know that he likes her? I think Alex even loves her... Hihi I hope so and that they'll eventually end up together :""") I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoy reading this story alot :) please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this story! Please update soon- it made me smile and i wnat to find out hat happens with alexs dad:) Carly :D |
![]() ![]() Can't wait to find out what happens when they actually do meet Alex's father! I'm looking forward to your next update, I've never read a story like this so I'm finding it very interesting. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story ! |