Im intrigued, though your story summary should be edited I think; it seems to give an impression of horrible grammar, which is not the case, the story is well written.

I'm intrigued. One thing: Mary's not really her stepmother, right? More of a fostermother or adoptive mother?

that's awesome:) looking forward to a new update

aww...how cute..

it's good that eva is meeting new friends..

and nice of alex to help her read and write..

upfate soon

uhh oh he is taking her to a fancy restraunt cant wait to see what happens.

ah! im so happy you updated! KEEP IT COMING!

Awesome chapter! Update soon!

Hey this was pretty good. I noticed a few mistakes here and there. I like the way that you had the small fight in there at the end. Well, I know this a short review I'm sorry. I liked it and I'll be looking forward to the next chapter

Loved it! And could you try to update sooner please! Anyways update ASAP!

O.M.F.G i love it!

most authors ruin chemistry like that by making it too kind or too unkind or steam up things at a annoying fast pace or a boring slow pace...

you my dear are just damn perfect and i hope it stays that way...

update soon kay!

im favouriting this one its a knock out!

çiao!

Hmm.. Alex seems to be getting nice. What's going on? Update soonn!

That was a great chapter. Good thing someone asked about the time scope for this story because I myself was wondering the same thing. Update soon! I like how possessive and considerate Alex is being.

oh okay this is getting very interesting lol!

love love love it !

i like how he has his moments with her

its too adorable

cant wait til you update again :)

I liked this chapter, but I do think you might have to go back and edit a few things just so that there are a few indications of when this is. Eva has seen cars before but not taxis. It isn't a big deal, but I did think it was set at least 40 years before it would have to be set for this chapter. Otherwise, I really liked it. Update soon. ~jlr