Reviews for Forbidden Touch |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story is simply delightful I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED I about fainted when i saw the update! Do you know the ages of them again? I dont remember! Thanks :D UPDATE SON I BEG OF YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! this is good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jealousy is so sexy, especially concerning Alex. I love the morning snuggling, it's so sweet. And Eva's dress looks like it's something from Alice in Wonderland. Great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh ... my ... God! That Dress! I just looked at the picture - I can't imagine myself even attempting to put it on, let alone go out in it! I feel so bad for Eva right now! Hope you'll UPDATE again soon, I wanna see what'll happen next, and I can't wait to see whats going on with that Tyler dude and Mary too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dun dunn I can't wait to find out what the animosity between Tyler and Alex is. Then I just wanted to compliment you on your writing because reading through the chapters you've gotten significantly better in spelling mistakes and just with the flow of how it all sounds. So I'm enjoying and can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool beans! i loved it.. plz write more! |
![]() ![]() yees!you updated!great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() why does mary and alex hate tyler mystery soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, what is it? POST SOON! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder what is so wrong with Tyler that causes everyone that knows him to not like him! Hope to find out soon. At least Eva gets to get out of the house. Hope you update very soon cause I cant wait to read the next chapter that is sure to be good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He is very very evil! He embarresed her and made fun of her because she cant read! At least he was a little concerned when she broke down in tears! Now they have to sleep together. Great chapter will read the next one now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() uh oh! wonder what Alex has planned for them tomorrow! I still cant believe him though he wouldnt even let her have some privacy while she took a bath! Now she is his slave and she belongs to him thats so wrong! Anyways great chapter will read the next one when I can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! I cant believe he made her get whipped he is truly evil! And then he took her teddy bear. Then after all of that he is going to give her a bath! I dont understand Alex's decisions sometimes! Great chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He gave her a whole plate of food that was nice. Good thing for Eva he is leaving. Great chapter again will read the next one in a little! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Thanks for updating! i can't wait for the next chapter :) |