Reviews for Forbidden Touch
jen chapter 15 . 11/7/2011
good stuff im not loged on tight now but as soon as i do i will but this on my alert list
mylittlePRINCESS chapter 15 . 10/20/2011
i love this ,its great story,update soon please.
thedarkone19 chapter 15 . 10/16/2011
That's an amazing chapter. I can't believe that he would do that to Eva. He loves her but he treats her like crap? Wow, such a great person. I know that he can't displease his dad but come on. there's a thing called acting. I loved it. Keep up the good work Dark Forest. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
crissy19 chapter 15 . 10/16/2011
cant wait till she meets her farther, the next update should be interesting.
Wow chapter 15 . 10/9/2011
OMG update can not wait!
deshaunwalker chapter 15 . 9/24/2011
Ugh Tyler's an asshat...
booklover19 chapter 15 . 9/23/2011
OMG! I totally love this story! I like Alex to be hot and cold but not that cold, While reading this I felt sorry for Eva. What an evil and naughty boy he is! Ahaha! Still love it, though. XOXO
Rachie03 chapter 15 . 9/19/2011
I absouletly love this story but I really want Alex to not be as hot or cold like i like him being hot and cold but i would like a reason all so maybe you could put that Alex kisses her when she thinks she's asleep but she thinks she imaginged things. Haha Anyway keep up the good work hope you UD soon!

xx
amber chapter 10 . 9/18/2011
i think you need to set this in an alternate reality, because- and don't get me wrong, i love love love this story- as a history major, i'm telling you it doesn't fit ANY time period
Bubbly Girl chapter 15 . 9/17/2011
THis story is really turning out great! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl
Kcoarra chapter 15 . 9/17/2011
Very good chapter! I like how the story is going and I can't wait to see how the trip to Alex's fathers goes.
Fallcolours chapter 15 . 9/17/2011
Awesome I love Alex 3 more more moreeeee pleasee _
romancelove20 chapter 15 . 9/17/2011
wow I'm scared for Eva lol I wonder what his dad will say. So is Eva suppose to look like Vanessa Hudgens or Zoe Kravitz? I could picture Zoe, Lenny Kravitz daughter because she's light and mixed but Vanessa Hudgens is good too.
The Innocent One 17 chapter 15 . 9/17/2011
D: *gasp* awww now i cant wait for the next chapter T-T
curlyCharlie chapter 14 . 8/27/2011
i absolutly L.O.V.E this story! please continue! i like how you added Alex's POV's, it helped understand a lot in this. i love how he chose eva to save, and how he's nice to her. at the same time i absolutly hate how he made her kiss the ground behind him and threw her outside naked. but i suppose his meaness is a keyn point in this... anyways, please please please update! i cant wait:DDDDD

Carly xo
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