Reviews for Forbidden Touch |
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![]() ![]() good stuff im not loged on tight now but as soon as i do i will but this on my alert list |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this ,its great story,update soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's an amazing chapter. I can't believe that he would do that to Eva. He loves her but he treats her like crap? Wow, such a great person. I know that he can't displease his dad but come on. there's a thing called acting. I loved it. Keep up the good work Dark Forest. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cant wait till she meets her farther, the next update should be interesting. |
![]() ![]() OMG update can not wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh Tyler's an asshat... |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I totally love this story! I like Alex to be hot and cold but not that cold, While reading this I felt sorry for Eva. What an evil and naughty boy he is! Ahaha! Still love it, though. XOXO |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absouletly love this story but I really want Alex to not be as hot or cold like i like him being hot and cold but i would like a reason all so maybe you could put that Alex kisses her when she thinks she's asleep but she thinks she imaginged things. Haha Anyway keep up the good work hope you UD soon! xx |
![]() ![]() i think you need to set this in an alternate reality, because- and don't get me wrong, i love love love this story- as a history major, i'm telling you it doesn't fit ANY time period |
![]() ![]() ![]() THis story is really turning out great! I can't wait for the next chapter! :) Peace, Love and Happiness! :) ~Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good chapter! I like how the story is going and I can't wait to see how the trip to Alex's fathers goes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome I love Alex 3 more more moreeeee pleasee _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow I'm scared for Eva lol I wonder what his dad will say. So is Eva suppose to look like Vanessa Hudgens or Zoe Kravitz? I could picture Zoe, Lenny Kravitz daughter because she's light and mixed but Vanessa Hudgens is good too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() D: *gasp* awww now i cant wait for the next chapter T-T |
![]() ![]() ![]() i absolutly L.O.V.E this story! please continue! i like how you added Alex's POV's, it helped understand a lot in this. i love how he chose eva to save, and how he's nice to her. at the same time i absolutly hate how he made her kiss the ground behind him and threw her outside naked. but i suppose his meaness is a keyn point in this... anyways, please please please update! i cant wait:DDDDD Carly xo |