| Reviews for Forbidden Touch |
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   HoPELeSS.RoMaNTiiC chapter 13 . 7/29/2010 I really like this story.I think that her attitude toward s him in the earlier chapters should be a bit different though. I think that she should recognise that he's good looking but brush it off instead of dwelling on it because it doesn't seem right, if you get what I mean :) Update soon please |
| MaxMcDowell chapter 13 . 7/29/2010 Thank you so much for the update!~hands you a big plat of cookies for you and your muse~I can't wait to see what happens next. P.S. Are you ever going to update Fantasy Freedom? |
| DiexGaaf chapter 13 . 7/29/2010 Ah, so now we have a backstory :) Cool! Update soon! |
| Ghost n' Ghoul Girl chapter 12 . 7/27/2010 (preppy school girl) OhMiGoad! (end of preppy school girl) this story is amazing so far! PLEASE make Alex nice like this a whole lot more from now on! i love it when they get along! update soon please! i cant wait! |
| DeltoraChick05 chapter 12 . 7/5/2010 D: why did it end? I love this so much ! Please update soon :) keep writing :D |
| amy269 chapter 12 . 6/26/2010 Wow! This story has definetly had a major twist. I like that Alex is finally letting his gaurd down and Eva as well. Im sure that you will do a great job with the rest of the story! Update soon! |
| clairey chapter 12 . 6/24/2010 Yey i love this...update soon ] |
| Madison Clarke chapter 12 . 6/15/2010 i was feeling really bad for Ava in the begining but im glad alex is being nicer to her. im really enjoying the story. please update soon. |
| crissy19 chapter 1 . 5/22/2010 thats so cute...love this story |
| momo3069 chapter 12 . 5/16/2010 Nice story, keep going |
| thedarkone19 chapter 12 . 5/13/2010 This was a good chapter although were some typos I enjoyed it alot. I was surprised in the last chapter that alex was being so nice to her. So what made such turn events that alex had a crush on her? I would like to know but yet a wonderful surprise that it's a small thing that will keep me reading until the very end. I will later PM you to let you know where the mistakes are that need to be fixed when I get the chance. I thank you for uploading yet another magnifociant chapter. Keep up the good work DarkForest. I enjoy reading your story. can't wait till the next chapter |
| LorriBetha chapter 12 . 5/11/2010 Uh oh - this could be a good thing or a bad thing, and I'm slightly scard to find out which. Sorry about the late review, not able to get on the computer, but was so happy to see this one's been updated too! UPDATE again soon please! You can't keep leaving us in suspense. |
| TheWhispersHauntMe chapter 12 . 5/10/2010 If Alex likes her so much why does he treat her so bad? Amazing chapter! Loved it! :D |
| jlr chapter 12 . 5/9/2010 This was a good chapter. I like that there was conflict even in this sweet moment. I also was struck by the improvement in your writing over the course of this story. I think that when you are done writing the story you'll be capable of improving it by revising some of the chapters you've already posted. And, in case that is taken in the wrong manner, I value improvement over perfection. ~jlr |
| Ivix chapter 12 . 5/9/2010 wow.. i read this story long time ago.. andthought it was abandonned.. thanks god yoou'red still updating.. thanks so much .. added on alert list :D |