| Reviews for Forbidden Touch |
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   RMB4 chapter 12 . 5/8/2010 Hey, I like the story in many ways. My only problem still is your historical setting. I am a bit confused when the story is supposed to take place. You mentioned somewhere it is supposed to be around 1800...then you say it is a little later...but coke wasn't invented till the late 19th century and only sold as a normal drink from the 20th century and onwards. You did the same with the whole soccer-thing. It's these little things that make this story a bit unbelievable and that's a shame, because as a story it is quite nice. Don't worry about it too much though, you can always change them, but keep looking at those details! |
| crissy19 chapter 11 . 4/27/2010 One of my favs. Update update update |
| sands of time chapter 1 . 4/19/2010 I love this story, update soon. |
| somewherepastnowhere chapter 11 . 4/17/2010 I really enjoy reading this story, please update soon! :) |
| Alice In Dreamland chapter 1 . 4/6/2010 Wow, awesome story! Can't wait to see more of this! |
| Chocorange888 chapter 11 . 3/30/2010 I really like things from Alex's point of view, I have to admit, I find this whole story a bit surreal, I mean what kind of girl in the modern age doesn't know what a taxi is? Still, it's cute. Thanks. |
| Aeris Rommyu chapter 11 . 3/23/2010 Aww cute :] You should do Alex p.o.v.'s more often |
| I Murder on Impulse chapter 11 . 3/21/2010 Cute story :D xx Ali |
| Summerlane chapter 11 . 3/21/2010 This was so cute!I want more! |
| darkgurl92 chapter 11 . 3/21/2010 aww..how cute...so alex does like/love eva...he's just hiding his own feelings.. update soon. |
| briitstar3 chapter 11 . 3/20/2010 two thumbs up lol |
| Goddess Sati chapter 11 . 3/20/2010 oh, you're back, that's so great:) |
| TheWhispersHauntMe chapter 11 . 3/20/2010 I like Alex'x POV. it helps me understand why he does what he does cause in Eva's POV. it seems like he enjoys watching her in pain. Great chapter! :) Update soon! |
| laughing moon chapter 11 . 3/20/2010 Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! I feel like I have been waiting forever! And now I finally got to read another chapter! YES! Plz plz plz plz hurry and upload another one, I can't wait to find out what her present is! |
| Kcoarra chapter 11 . 3/19/2010 Yay! I am so glad he likes her, that makes me happy. If only he would be nicer to her. |