Reviews for Zeta Something: The Saga of Screw Ups
the good dr chapter 8 . 7/30/2008
Uh, Ok that did give us some background I guess. Is it me or is SB-42 similar to HK-47 from the Star Wars universe?

signed the good dr.
the good dr chapter 7 . 7/14/2008
It's sad, I don't know any of those actors (by name). So the kick ass chick was a janitor... that sucks. You do realize that Twin Ion Engines is from starwars right (TIE fighter)? Eh, I don't think anyone else will notice. Until next time...

signed the good dr.
the good dr chapter 6 . 7/14/2008
I am silently laughing (its 2 in the morning).

signed the good dr.
Bazooka Joy chapter 3 . 6/18/2008
This chapter confused me just a little bit.

I'm new to reading science-fiction so I'll get the hang of it pretty soon. Once again, well written.
Bazooka Joy chapter 2 . 6/17/2008
I did enjoy this, thanks. I don't flame, that's just totally inappropriate. You've got real good grammar and it's funny.

There was something that I noticed. You wrote that Tardie is short for Technologically Advanced Droid Intelligence Epicenter

Where's the R in it?

Also, it's not a good idea to refer to your story in the chapter. That's a no-no.

Other than that I loved it.
Bazooka Joy chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Oh this is interesting. Short but not bad. I'd like to know where this is going.