Please update! This story is so damn good.

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Wow i really love this story, so please keep writing i really want to know what happens next:)

Hey!

I love this story. Honestly, though, I can't tell if it's over or if you just stopped updating. I think it's a waste if you leave it at that. You should carry it on and keep it going, or at least give it a better ending than this. It's such a good story, and your writing is quite good as well. It makes no justice to end it just like that. It's too sudden. It can be better. :)

Keep up the good work and don't stop writing! D

Have you forgot about this storryy cause I'm waiting for an update! What happens next what happens next? I love all the suspense and twists! Awesome!

Do you watch AllThatGlitters21 on YouTube?

You should update soon! :(

And, yes, I love the way you write! The dialogue doesn't seem too rehearsed. The situations are painfully real. Especially for David. But yeah... wish you'd continue this story.

I love this, it's so... real. The reactions, the dialogue, I just love that it's realistic. And I feel so sorry for Elizabeth. Definitely looking forward to updates!

Omgosh! I love this! Hurry up with the next chapter pleease :) xx

Dear Author,

I notice that you haven't updated this story since the o-eight, and I wonder if you've given up. Please don't do that- I love your story. It's very simple-minded, in a way that is most intreging! I would love for you to continue this story, it's very beautiful and interesting. Your use of imagery is very developed and awe-striking. Once again, please update!

Lots Of Love,

December.

AW NO! Keep them somewhat together! Pwease! They're so cute! I love them!

Okay. My gushing is out of the way. NOW.

I really like this story. The only thing I could say about it is that it moves a smidge fast and is slightly repetitive. Moving fast is really only apparent in the beginning. Brian moves right in on Elizabeth, and none too discreetly. He's very blatant with his attraction, and because of that, it seems a smidge fast. But once they hook up, it's fine. I like the frequency of their encounters; you have enough Brian to keep the reader wanting more, but not so much that it seems more like the intended chance-encounter instead of a blantantly-not-chance-encounter, which you could've easily done, and it's fantastic you didn't. And by repetitive, I mean that Brian comes on to Elizabeth in a similar fashion each time. He's always just so close. I feel like this is the manner of his come-on too often, but I just can't bring myself to dislike it-it's too damn sexy!

But your story is quite impressive as far as details are concerned. Your writing is actually very good-I say it like that because it seems that only people who have NO writing ability write about teacher-students, and let me tell you, that sucks for us readers that love them -_-. But I LOVE the way you write. It's very fluid and everything fits together and sounds lovely together. And you seem to have a romantic knack; your romantic scenes are very steamy and hot and quite sexy. I can't get enough!

Very good piece. Please continue! The only thing I would caution you on is how often you have the characters say the name of the person they're talking to in dialogue. Brian and Elizabeth seem to address each other too frequently when they're conversing. But, other than that, fabulous! I really love this story and an update would be TOTALLY KEWL :D!

I thin kthis is a really good story and I look forward to hearing more from it. Great job!

i think you should up the rating on this story ! i love the smutt .. update soon .. cant wait till something happens with them

keep going!

I have fallen for this story so plz continue on with the story plz