|Reviews for Folklore|
| WriterInTransition chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
i love it so far and wish you would continue. I loved how descriptive you were. The words you used to set the tone of the story are great and the repetition for me only helps to reinforce the idea. I have read many stories that have weres and i do think you have the begining of a good story. i would be interested to find out who becomes of the alpha male and the wereling..
| Kneecap chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Hmm, there was a bit too much on setting in the first few paragraphs for me, but once I got into it, it was quite good .
I have a perverted mind and giggled at "The alpha male of the group stood tall and erect". Hehehehe.
Though I think sometimes you tend to repeat adjectives by using synonyms. Guh. That doesn't really work for me.
But all in all, no real complaints :D.
| sneekie chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
hey very imaginative. Although I don't read these kind of stories I thought I'd return the favour. Hope you continue on with this and write more
| kool-aidrocks2008 chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
seems interesting. you should consider continuing.