|Reviews for Devil cake|
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
i think this poem says alot about hope. hope is one of the most important things in life. if you don't have hope you don't have anything.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
"since I met you, my days lighted a bit." Not sure what you meant there. Day's lighter a bit or Day's lightened up a bit, maybe?
"everybody waits for the grand final"...finale
Like how those two parts were repetitive until the last word changed, though I would capitalize Need since all the other ones are. The piece is sad and well done. Though if it works with the angel cake song maybe add it as a second chapter to that song? Just a thought.
| Qzie chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I kept thinking of this as a song... anyways... I rather like it, especially the stanza, "Catch me, Catch me
Catch me, Catch me,
Catch me, Love me." connecting to "Love me, Love me
Love me, Love me,
Love me, need me."
It was good. :) Chat later. -Qzie
| Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
I can totally hear this as a song! Nice work, I like the imagery of the raining feather.