Reviews for Temple Rats
J.N. Lloyd chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
This is really heartfelt, the imagery was flawless and your metaphors concerning the corruption of religion by greedy people is astoudning. I am going to read your other poems!
Tytherpol chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
nice poem

i wish this was talked about more often

and talked about from this point of view more often

but if most of the authorities believe their metaphors

then it's kinda suppressed pretty quickly

you know about 2 years ago (before obama and hilary hit the scene), i looked up a poll representing "who americans won't vote into presidency" or something like that & "atheist" had the lowest percentage (about 14 per cent i think), which i found stunning at the time. and i guess i do still find it incredible.

but yeah i liked this poem.