Reviews for Vulnerable
gigglemagic chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
dear mel this is giggles. aka your long lost sister (Bri) lol. this poem is very touching!
Counting Petals chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
"I can hardly breath" "breathe"

That was the only thing I could see wrong with it, though.
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
the flow and repetition made this sound very pretty, like a sad love song... Nice work. _
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
It's a little repetitious, but overall it was good. Nice emotion, nice theme. Good job.