|Reviews for Track 023|
| Skyless11 chapter 4 . 4/21/2013
"oh, fuck" I say too, now that I've seen the last update date. Did I come too late? Have I no chance for another update? QQ please? it;s way too amazing to let go! please please please please!
I love the main character, the brotherly bond, the weird two characters, brendan and how he acts... but I want more...
| Anonymous chapter 3 . 5/8/2012
Question... If Brendan and Spencer are full blooded brothers, how are they only a month apart? They'd have to be at least 9/10 months or so apart, right? If I missed something then just ignore me aha.
| Mmm Donut Seeds chapter 3 . 6/30/2011
Page breaks. Consider them, alright? I like the characters and the story sounds interesting, but it's kind of hard to follow because you switch points of view all the time and it's hard to follow.
| sundayguts chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
This seems like one of the better Slash stories on this site- with good charecters and humor that doesnt border on just retarted.
| f chapter 4 . 1/13/2011
i love this stort. please write more.
| rye-chan chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Seems pretty fun so far. I'm looking foreward to reading the rest. :)
| jacy chapter 4 . 9/18/2010
Keegan's awesome! He rocks.
I really like this, so update! Please... *kneels and begs*
| annouska chapter 3 . 8/25/2010
Seriously? You leave it at that? But I need MORE. Give us the precious (the precious being the next chapter)
Now don't make me kidnap your cat (or pet or whatever) and hold it hostage for more chapters!
| annouska chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
Brendan is so sweet! Keeping his brother's picture, looking out for him and all! Your characters shine like raw diamonds (or maybe not so raw, they're pretty well-developed for a point so early in the story, but I really wanted to say 'raw characters')
GREAT chapter! Lovin it, adorin' it, worshipin' it!
| annouska chapter 1 . 8/25/2010
O-ho-ho. High school drama! Lame when the author can't write, pretty damn awesome in your case!I like this!
Random: I, being very greek, had never heard the phrase 'raised in a barn' but now I know it AND there is an equal in greek (only it goes like 'were you born on a ship?')
ANYWAY. I'm off to the next chapter then!
| Blaze Moonlight chapter 3 . 8/4/2010
This is a really interesting story, I love the dynamics you've presented between the characters (partularly Brendan and Spencer) and the intruige with Easy and Colby. Great story, I can't wait to read more.
| me chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
it's really good, i would love it if you wrote more and updated as soon as possible!
| Liz chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
I know you updated yesterday, but... Please? Odin, I'm a crack addict for new updates.
Word on the street is that reviews are like wheels on a cart. So I hope this encouraged you to kindly grace the planet with a continuation of this fantasticality.
| Insanity chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
This is such a good story! I love your characters, creativity, plot and writing technique. I cant wait to read more and I really hope that you're continuing soon :P
| Brandi Heir chapter 3 . 7/7/2010
i love this story. there's a sense of mystery that makes the story more interesting.
i love the characters too. they're real, not perfect, and enjoyable.
please continue this story. update soon!