This is the second time I'm reading your story and I can't believe it doesn't have reviews. The story is pretty nice, it has a nice flow and you don't get lost in small details.

There's only one small mistake I noticed, when you talk about Garwen and Jrengen relationship you say they are grandson-granfather, but later you say that Garwen great-great-grandson. And sometimes you say great-great-grandson and then you change to grandson. I think its the only major mistake I can find.

It's been one of the few dragon stories worth reading. You focus on their relationship and make it feel as if this could be possible.