Reviews for Her Broken Story
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
The rhyming scheme worked well, it didn't sound forced at all. I also like your descriptions of her, they are very true to life. I didn't like ending in ellipses though, it seemed odd. Other than that well done.

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