Reviews for Why?
jess.rose chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
love this it is like i feel.
softersin chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Wow, it's like you know exactly how I feel at this very moment.

I love it!

Good job :)
brokencrystal7 chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
"you can love someone, with no love in return"

those two lines really made me think of my life. it's heartbreaking. :(
MagicalThinking chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
good god.._ I definitely understand this poem; I have gone through this misery and I know it can be a terrible pain..o_O its weird, because usually its like one you've never felt-you find yourself asking "Wow..o_O and no internal bleeding?" its just an odd sensation of agony that you had no idea you had in you (super confusing but I think you get it)

anyway, this poem again is wonderful simply because one can identify with it; its not so in-depth about the story behind it to where people are led off track, its just direct so people can configure it to their own lives

wonderfully written! _ i love this one, its amazing! Keep it up!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
You rhyme sometimes, but not in a scheme at all. I might work on that.

I do like the idea of the piece because it is interesting and most people can relate to at least some of it. I also like the ending, it fits perfectly.

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lymli chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
the rhyme from the starting is cool.