please write another chapter! i wanna know what happens! (:

Really enjoyed the first part of this. Keep up the good work, and hopeing to see the next part soon

This was good and I'm excited to see where it goes. The plot is really good and I think you can do a lot with it. Im excited to read more!

I really loved this. The only problem was, that there weren't many details. I didn't always understand where she was in the car, or what it looked like. It's really good though. Keep writing!

Wow, I love the suspense! It's there even from the start. Keep writing!