Reviews for My Own Shoes
rolliepollie44 chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
I really, REALLY like the chorus to this one, it's very catchy, and that last line really blew me away. The verses were good as well, they just wern't as catchy as the chorus but all in all its one of my favorite songs i've read on here! :)

MagicalThinking chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
I absolutely love the way you word your poems/songs-they are innovative, and their is a certain rhthym that falls in between each line thats very catching..Your pace is always perfect; wonderful piece! Keep it up! _