Reviews for Take Two: Final Draft
loveofallthatisawesome chapter 34 . 5/1/2012
I finished this story a couple of days ago and I don't know why I just couldn't review immediately after finishing it. So here I am now.

I was flabbergasted. I was confused a lot of times because I loved both Eden and Eric, and at times I was rooting for Eden to end up with Jenna, but at the same time I waned her to be with Eric. I couldn't decide and that is something that has never happened to me. I thought for sure I would choose Eric, but I didn't. I mean, the way you made Eden be so completely in love with Jenna was what made me want them to be together. But at the same time, seeing how Eric slowly changed to the point where he loved Jenna as much as Eden did was amazing and made me want Jenna to be with both of them. But in the end I'm glad she chose Eric [because he knows her better and he didn't try to rape her].

Which brings me to another point: the rape. Reading those journal entries was creepy. I can easily imagine a little girl writing those things and thinking all of that and it freaked me out. She was so young, and the fact that it traumatized her to the point that she couldn't differentiate between types of love really showed how much she had been through and how she still wasn't over it. I felt so bad for Eden after they slept together because of that - because Jenna thought she was just satisfying him for a while and they'd be best friends again, but Eden didn't want that. Even though I wanted to be frustrated with him, I understood where he was coming from, but I understood Jenna too, and Eric. So I didn't know what to think.

I'm glad it took her months to figure that stuff out though. And I'm glad that she broke off ties with the two brothers until she figured herself out.

I just thought this story was amazing. All the secrets, the relationships, the characters - they were all really great.
reindrops chapter 33 . 10/31/2011
Wow, I didn't sleep just to finish the entire story. Well, at least, it's the ending that I wanted. Eric and Dev are adorable together. And I'm glad that Eden is not dating Jenna. I just think that Jenna is a bitch. Well-written story, btw.
reindrops chapter 25 . 10/30/2011
Oh noes. What about Eric? Hahaha!
reindrops chapter 16 . 10/30/2011
I really like your story. I like how I can also feel what the characters feel.
reindrops chapter 12 . 10/30/2011
Does this mean what I think it means? I fully remember her saying that Jenna smells like sugar or something.. and now Eden tastes like sugar. RAWR. Oh well.. I like Eric more anyway. Haha!
reindrops chapter 8 . 10/30/2011
OMG. He likes someone else. Hahahaha. Loved it.
MuffinsRoxSox chapter 33 . 2/12/2011
Okay, I started reading this...yesterday? The day before? Well, anyway, I'm sorry I didn't review earlier. This story is truely amazing and it was gorgeous. The characters can be so...fustrating, yet you can't help but love them. Well, that's what I think of them. Anyway, I don't want to start ranging on and on, so I'm going to go now. Great job with this story. :)
BedSloth chapter 34 . 11/24/2010
I loved your the turns and the depth.I really liked it.
Ceri Anne chapter 34 . 11/5/2010
I only discovered this story yesterday, but haven't been able to stop reading it! (I may have been reading it whilst at work, when I was supposed to be, you know, working...) Your writing is truly amazing, and the way you wrote about Devan's abuse was so well done. Especially the diary entries and flashbacks. I've read far too many stories where the portrayal of younger children just isn't realistic, so well done! I'm going to have to go and read the rest of your stories now. Can't wait!
dear zonette chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
Just re-read this again. Ah I love to re-read my favorites. Thank you for a great piece of work. I love getting into your characters again and again! I felt like I was in the action and the characters were well developed! Thank you so much! great job!
Dustland chapter 9 . 8/18/2010
gah, I just want to cry.

This is the reason I hate love triangles /

It's just.. i love eden and eric!

but right now I'm actually more on erics side..sigh

*goes on to finish the story to know what happens*
Julia2Cj chapter 33 . 1/23/2010
This is a good epilogue. The entire rewrite is vastly better than the original, as I'm sure you already know. I just re-read it and realized I'd never commented. But this is the perfect kind of epilogue: both substance and fluff, heart-warming but informative, wrapping up loose ends in satisfactory ways. Thanks.
Shikaido Yuki chapter 34 . 1/19/2010
one of the best fics i've ever read! now you're to blame for the dark circles under my eyes tomorrow, lol. i had such fun reading this! thanks! :D
blahbookblah chapter 34 . 11/28/2009
This was one of the best stories I've read on Fictionopress. The characters were amazing and the plot kept me interested. It was just such an incredible story. (: Thanks for writing it.
Blue Sword chapter 34 . 10/6/2009
Hi there!

Just wanted to say that your story is probably the best Love Triangle I've ever read, in a very cliched but original way :) I loved how things ended! Thanks for the amazing read...can't wait to read your other stuffs.

P/S: Those excerpt from the journal really creep me out a little.
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