|Reviews for Her Love's Duel|
| Bavand chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Wow, love the weaving of the acorn's life with the love story and the battle. Man, darlin, imagery is definitely one of your strengths!
My only criticism is "doom". I was taught never to repeat the same word in the same paragraph/stanza/scene and definitely not on the same page. It forces you to really get creative and expand your vocabulary with other synonyms or to rethink and rework a redundant thought. Obviously "acorn" is necessary, but it's given a new flavor/new slant in each stanza with "resting", "watching", "fallen", etc.,. But "doom" gets a little old and could use some creative replacements.
| Emily chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I loved it! Beautiful!