Reviews for Love and Fate |
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![]() ![]() sorry cnt be bothered to sign in your story is absolutely amazing! I love it! I wish Steven would stop fornicating with other girls and I just cnt believe what happened between him, jodie and bridgette. it's just soo shocking. my favourite characters are dominic, julie and David. what I don't get is why the men are awful to the girls but then start falling for them. it's weird yet I understand it since I'm dating the guy who bullied me when we were younger and we are very much in strong like of eachother. please continue. ur a brilliant writer! looking forward to the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my fricken gosh. I am so happy i decided to read this and not just write it off. This has quickly became one of my favorite stories. Please plase update this soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is seriously good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad you finally updated! It was a good chapter thank you for taking the time to write it! |
![]() ![]() I really love this story! I hope you update it soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow again (sorry, I sent you one before as KC because I hadn't registered yet)! Now I am finally caught up. :) I must confess, even when Steven was still being sweet and Dominic an ass, I still liked Dominic a whole lot more. Steven has been my least favorite the whole time. :P Keep up the good work, I love your characters. |
![]() ![]() Great new chapter, i am glad you updated. keep up the solid work and don't keep us waiting too long pumpkin head. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. I can't wait for you to update! -Raven |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well dang. I thought she was gonna really hurt David. Someone needs to kick him in the balls... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story so far. I cant wait for you to update! -Raven |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so confused...why is she acting like this again? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that was interesting... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure how many hits you've gotten, but you've only gotten one review. You'd probably get more reviews and stuff if you spaced your chapters out. You have 14 chapters in 5 days, thats a lot. Also you're writing in 2nd person. I guess it's ok but people are taught not to write in second person unless there is a reason that goes along with the story for it. Maybe I'm just missing it. Otherwise your story would be really good! So just changing it to 1st or 3rd person would make your story so much better. Good job and keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! He sure had a crappy life didn't he? |