Reviews for Immortal Sapphire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, please please, I AM BEGGING You, update this story! I love it so much, Ellya finally discovered her mother 's identity, we have three dudes trying to get her attention and not one of them knowing about their rivals, it is just too fantastic! Will she take the Demon King' s throne or something else? I just need to know. This story is too awesome to leave unfinished, please, I know that I am being annoying by nagging so much, that life happens and it has been 7 years since the last chapter, but please please update soon! I will always hope for a new chapter of it. |
![]() ![]() This is one of the greatest stories that I have ever come into aquaintance with on Fictionpress. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why hasnt there been an update in so long! I absolutely love this story. Please update soon, I would love to see what happens next and what becomes of Ellya and the demon realm! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story is really convincing and very well written. looking forward to the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's stories like this I could see published and being sold in book stores, well-thought-of and well-written.I'm hooked and looking forward to what is next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Sigh* It's ridiculous how good this story is. I can't even begin to shower you with praise for it, so I'm just going to settle with a, "you just totally blew my mind with your amazing writing." And now I am going to do the expected thing and demand for an update to be ridiculously soon just because I want to get the point across. Oh! And just saying, for that part where Ellya tripped the obnoxious dude, I was so psyched. He had just gotten owned! It was rather lovely. You had me saying "Oh snap!" when Vanden recognized her. On that note, I was wondering, does that Tresar dude remember her? Is that why he was furious, or was it just because he got owned in front of everyone? I was just wondering. And so, I say tallyho! Sincerely, DonHanz |
![]() ![]() I kinda, sorta forgot what has happened but I'm glad there is a new chapter! |
![]() ![]() There's no suggestions coz its so perfect! So he knows now huh? OMG~~ Kyaa~~ What will he do now? What will she do? The suspense is killing meee~ Can't wait for the next chapter, not rushing you for it or anything though. I believe in quality over quantity and the same goes for time. If you need more time to make it good then its all good. Keep writing. I shall wait patiently for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I can't wait to see what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would normally give some constructive criticism but it's like, 2am. So I'll just tell you that I thought the fight scene was really well written and I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() another chapeter, another chapter, please! |
![]() ![]() ¡You updated! I love this story and this has made my day but why the cliff hangar? I really hope you update soon like a week or even within a month but really I'm just glad you updated there are too many stories on here that go on hiatus and are never finished however because you have updated that means I want more! So if you give a mouse a cookie or give a reader another chapter they'll ask for another! I loved the fight and I kind of hope she turns around and goes crazy Kung fo demon warrior on the demons :) |
![]() ![]() Oh My God! That was such a cliffhanger! By the time I was at the end of the chapter I was having a fit of excitement and anticipation. This story is so AMAZING! GYAH! (sorry, I'm totally freaking out right now) But seriously, this is a really well written story, and I love the characters you have so far and your depiction of them. You know, I almost didn't read the story, but then I was like, "Eh, you never know. It might actually be really good." And I read it, and I am thoroughly pleased that I did. I can not wait for the next chapter :D So psyched. Sincerely, DonHanz |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so exciting I can't wait to read what happens next! |