Reviews for Immortal Sapphire
bluetinkerbell chapter 17 . 7/27/2009
I LOVE IT! These newest chapters were amazing. Obviously, I love the inclusion of Luthien, however small. I hope the two of them are paired hehehe.

I also like how you described her power. Her lightning, almost cobalt blue, is really cool. Your descriptions of it are super cool, and really set the scene.

As usual, you're amazing
ValerieYoung chapter 17 . 7/27/2009
awesome story! i reli like it! i luv ellya she reminds me a little of some1 i no haha. sad tat her parents died n da 1 who she luv left. cnt w8 2 raad wat happen next 2 ellya n da rest of da characters.
d00fus chapter 17 . 7/27/2009
yah! an update! this is one of the stories i read that i don't discard after a few chapters. keep up the good work!
Illumined chapter 15 . 7/14/2009
O please, O please, O please update already!

It's been nearly 6 weeks since you graduated!

(Gosh! I sound like a stalker)
nvrwstabreath chapter 15 . 6/18/2009
I'm so in love with this story. :D
readaholicxxx chapter 15 . 4/23/2009
oh my goodness

is she going to end up lifting the sword?

update soon!
readaholicxxx chapter 14 . 4/21/2009
i love this story so far!

update soon!
Asyriel Jaspar chapter 14 . 4/19/2009
You have a very good story, even if it isn't updated often it is worth the wait every time.
Illumined chapter 11 . 3/22/2009
So I'm back! Hehe

Upon reading more of Immortal Sapphire, I realized that your story's universe is very different from the book I previously mentioned. Your other chapters indicate that the two books bear no similarities whatsoever. None the less, I still love your story. Its been very engaging and unpredictable. I've been procrastinating my assignments so that I can read more of it.

im)patiently awaiting the next update...


Winged Unicorn

p.s: Do read A Song of Ice and Fire, its an amazing series. Though its not for everyone, I think you might like it (you'll know what I mean when you read it).
Illumined chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Im so glad I found this. Once in a blue moon, I read a story that I decide I really like just after reading the first chapter. This falls under that category. You’ve started this wonderfully, with great characters and vivid descriptions.

I love Ellya, who kind of reminds me of Arya from A Song of Ice and Fire Series.

You’ve also successfully conveyed the sense of approaching danger in the first chapter (which is the only chapter I’ve read by far...couldn’t wait to review before progressing to others). Related to that, I love how you’ve begun the chapter with the line, “the storm was coming”.

Again, that reminds me of House Stark’s motto, “Winter is Coming”. If your universe has been inspired from that series, I think you did an excellent job of it weaving it together while showcasing your own style of writing. (If you haven’t, you should really read that series, it’s one of my favourites). For an amateur, your writing is very un-amateurish.

To sum it all up- LOVE it!

Can’t wait to read the other chapters. Hope my very (high) expectations are fulfilled (and I mean that in the most positive way).


Winged Unicorn

p.s:bloody hell, this is my longest review to date. I do apologise for the tedious reading you had to go through. Haha.
nvrwstabreath chapter 14 . 2/19/2009
I've been waiting on edge for and update for this story! I love the style & everything about it. Excellent work!
AlijaS117 chapter 14 . 2/18/2009
great chapter i wonder when Vanden and her will meet again. update soon!
GrannyP chapter 14 . 2/18/2009
Hey! Congrats on your nomination! You totally deserved it. I thought that description was great. And this chapter wasn't lacking in that area either. That must be a strength of yours?

Okay, the guy's flirting is hilarious. I love cute little things like that. And Ellya totally has a thing for Luthien anyway. Heh heh.

Hm... could this platform fort cause problems for our hero in the future? I hope not. I would fall over in about five seconds. But that's just me.

Uh oh. Can't wait to see how this Lord from Dark Vision turns out. Is he good or bad? It's too soon for me to tell, I think.

Well, great job and congrats again! Keep up the good work!
Ink chapter 14 . 2/17/2009
You updated! D Yay.

Nataenal is... interesting. I love the Dark Vision guild. I can't even imagine living someplace like that. You have an awesome imagination.
GrannyP chapter 13 . 1/26/2009
Wow, that was a really excellent fight scene! It made me all nervous and everything! And the more I read this story, the more I like Luthien. He seems like such a sweet Demon Knight. (the thought of which makes me giggle just a little bit)

Anyway, thank you for writing this story. I have definitely enjoyed reading it! I look forwrd to reading more!
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