Reviews for and i'll cry if i want to
nihashaik.cs523 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
it's really very touching... I got a tear in my eyes...
RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Wow, excellent job! I really liked the symbolism, comparing the narrator to something so fragile, someone sick, a precious gemstone. Great way to describe a broken heart, how fragile you become.

I really liked the last line as well, it brought it to a fabulous close. Her heart is broken, but she's not going to feel sorry for herself, she's going to turn it into hatred for the one who broke it.

-Love from the RM, link on my page.
Rose-Divine chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Very lovely!

I especially liked the third verse and the "resentment in my eye" description.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
This is very cute, not in a belittling way but a heart-warming one. Reminds me of someone I just took out of my life. I'm sorry I'm bad at reviews, I tend to talk about concept rather than form. I lose.
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
clever!
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
i really like this. the formatting was really unique and the words are relatable. nice work. :]