|Reviews for the ballet of the raindrops|
| Iccle Fairy chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
great. i don't know if you've seen the visual music..i'm not sure what it's called, but balls hitting pipes and things..made me think of this...sorry not making sense...I enjoyed it :)
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I liked someof it but I just don't think that the last line really ends it well or works, you might want to add a little more or something.
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
aw, I love the imagery is kinda fun and sweet.