Reviews for Untitled
Samm.xXx chapter 25 . 1/8/2010
7 guards? way to go roscoe :)
slygirl chapter 27 . 7/21/2009
This is getting to be really really exciting. Things are starting to brighten up after the previous event. Keep writing! :)
Oboe Jenkins chapter 27 . 7/20/2009
I sure am glad you're planning to write a sequal because you can't just leave us hanging in this current state. I also think that you really need for Elizabeth and Roscoe to fall in love. It is just a suggestion but a very beautiful one if i do say so.
gcxcgrl chapter 27 . 7/18/2009
Ohh I like that ending...I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel! Out of all of the stories I'm reading you are probably the only one that has been continually updating and for that much I'm greatful, I think alot of people start stories and never finish them so congratulations and good luck with the sequel! I'll be waiting to read it!
Oboe Jenkins chapter 26 . 7/14/2009
Thanks for taking my advice. It makes me happy when people listen to what i say. I liked this chapter too. I really still firmly believe she should fall in love with Roscoe.
Oboe Jenkins chapter 25 . 7/10/2009
I knew it! I knew it all along! I knew she should have fallen for Roscoe, because I knew Dehrien wasn't going to be reliable and do something like this. GR! I wish that sometimes I could know when something happy is going to happen, not just all the bad stuff.
Oboe Jenkins chapter 22 . 7/10/2009
It's safer to use a very sharp blade that it is to use a dull blade.
Oboe Jenkins chapter 16 . 7/10/2009
So i looked at your pictures before i read this chapter and i was like why the heck is Soph asian, but i get it now. Oh i don't really think that your pictures go with the people just a personal thought.

Oh an your happy authors note was very nice to read. :)
Oboe Jenkins chapter 9 . 7/9/2009
okay so he thinks she's an orphan well she is, but that still doesn't explain my problem. I mean how come she had a horse at the freaking palace if she's just some chika, and what does he think of her out burst at her funeral. She's been cooped up in a little cottage for like two months how could she possibly know if the princess were still alive if she wasn't the princess?
Oboe Jenkins chapter 8 . 7/9/2009
so Dehrien is a knight right? And Elizabeth is the princess, so wouldn't Dehrien notice that he is taking care of the princess, or know what horse was the princess's or was he just an out of the loop knight, or one that didn't spend a lot of time at court. I honestly think he would still recognize the princess.
Oboe Jenkins chapter 6 . 7/8/2009
Hey chika i know what it's like don't be down hearted. Um i was going to say something but i forgot maybe i'll remember later.
Oboe Jenkins chapter 4 . 7/8/2009
I know this isn't supposed to be humorous, but when Elizabeth said untitled like a badly written book, i had to laugh. I don't think this is badly written though. I hope you think of a title. I'll try to help you when i read more.
slygirl chapter 18 . 6/14/2009
This is a really great story. Please update soon!
clair-a-net chapter 14 . 1/30/2009
Im glad the baby was born ok. though i hope the magical side effects arent that bad.
clair-a-net chapter 13 . 1/11/2009
thats a great time to have a baby. cant wait to see what happens next.
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