Reviews for Scrutiny
M3L0 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
COÑO! meng when's da next chapter coming?
digna's boobs chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
it was very descriptive..*startes into your eyes*
ManicRocKAddict chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
SEXY![readable p...o...-...n... in other words] lol & EVERYTHING CRAZY GOOD! HAHA!
melo chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
i only read the 1st chapter but its steamy and HOT! cant wait to read more... u already had me as a fan after the first moan..lol
THAT GUY chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
This was very good, i liked the way it describes every movevemnt, even the little things,and i like the moans in between( not in a bad way) i can't wait for the next chapter