|Reviews for Modern Romance of a Broken Soul|
| ramenrandomness chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Read all 12 chapters in 1 go.I like how Blake and Ella are opening to each other and supporting each other. I don't really understand Landon though. If they're such good friends, why won't he tell her he's dating Frankie? Won't it be worse if she finds out he never told her? But then he's giving mixed signals - I can't tell if he's treating her like a kid sister or he's also attracted to Ella
| pinkparty chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
your stories are fab fab fab. i've read all of them so far and i have to say that this story is my fav. im really sad you arent going to pursue it anymore tho. i know you're busy but if you ever get time, update this one for your fans!
| Rio's Desire chapter 15 . 11/3/2009
Me again, I think I like the revised version better, it feels so real, but after reading this as well I feel like there is alot missing in the revised one. What exactly is their relationship supposed to be? In this one, there seems to be more romance. In the revised one, it feels like their relationship is pained, like he doesn't care much for her at all. In this one, he said he cared alot for her.
I love your writing style, and that you don't rush things along. Keep updating your revised version, I feel this is one of those rare gems on fictionpress.
| Rio's Desire chapter 14 . 11/3/2009
Love this! They finally admitted their love for each other! I just love that this isn't all about them, but their families and friends are in it as well.
| welcome to meganland chapter 15 . 9/20/2009
Wow, I realy liked thiiss! It's so cute! I feel kind of bad for Blake, since like Eloise was kind of just saying it was just like attracted to him... I don't know.
I really like Blake, though. He seems like that one person you just want to fix, you know?
| Antiqua-hime17 chapter 15 . 8/16/2009
I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Kielke chapter 14 . 5/24/2009
i love the story so far;;
blake's defiantly my favorite!
cant wait for more
| NataliaNicolette chapter 14 . 5/22/2009
please please please update soon! :D
| Abogerreboo chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
Interesting story so far... XD sorry, that's all i can say at the mo. i have to read more first before i cn decide :D x
| msallaroundperfect chapter 14 . 5/13/2009
I love your story. I hope that you update soon. I also have a question, it's about the community that you/we're staff of. How do you add stories to it?
| Twist Their Emotions chapter 14 . 4/11/2009
Good story, but this chapter was choppy. Scenes, dialogue. Nothing transitioned or flowed.
| twilight24 chapter 14 . 4/5/2009
aw, that's cute. At least now she's figured out that blake really does like her for who she is and not for just the physical stuff. update soon!
| funnechick chapter 14 . 4/5/2009
Aww, Blake was so sweet! I can't imagine what's going to happen with him when he goes to see his father.
I wonder what Dax came to tell her? And really...how much could Nash like her? They've only known each other for a very short amount of time, right? Oh well, I can't wait to read the next chapter and I'm so glad Blake and Ella are in an actual relationship, YAY!
| happy ever afterxx chapter 14 . 4/4/2009
Great update! Yay! She finally stood up to her mother! The update was really sweet though :) and I totally understand about you not updating for ages. I myself took almost 3 whole months to update because of school and exams and whatnot. Anyways, more soon?
| We Used To Wait chapter 13 . 2/26/2009
Mhm, yeah, should be sorry. That was long. brutally so.
And Blakes not being a jerk...hm. I like him this way. Though I think I want to see a little more of his jerk-ish side. It entertains me.
Vivian and Eloise's relationship is weird. It really does seem like the mother cares but as the same time she's cold towards Eloise. It weird...
Oh yeah, and Eloise should make her brother wait longer. Only because I like to watch some people suffer. Forgive me.