Reviews for Blur Between The Lines
From The Stone Bridge chapter 1 . 10/8/2008
Loved it.
From The Stone Bridge chapter 1 . 9/6/2008
I am in awe.
na-na-nadia chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Wow, you are a really good writer. I love the third section the most, and the ending lines are some of the best I've ever read.
McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I don't know what to say. The ground, the stars, and the moon references are unbelievabley unexpected and far above what I could imagine.

I use parentheses a lot, so I always love that.

McKinley
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I liked it. Good piece.

Faith
East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I think the 2nd stanza is the best. What's a empyrean?
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I love "i." & "ii." you paint such awesome scenes with your words.

I think that the "(worthless)" at the end of iv. is unnecessary because it's already understood from the word "starless" ...at least I think so.