|Reviews for never should have loved|
| DemigodessOfEternity chapter 1 . 2/17/2017
This is beautiful x
| nihashaik.cs523 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
My days are too long with out you...
Please come back...
I can't live with out you...
| angel-Janna chapter 1 . 6/21/2011
yep. Just about sums it up.
| RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
I really liked how your originality shined through in this piece. Instead of saying the loved one was her air, he was her breath. Fantastic metaphor.
"i'm dying my hair again so you can see i've changed,
but you're forever and for always the same,"
I loved those two lines, they really signify how she wants him to see that she's changed for the better, but he still sees her as he always has; never changing his opinion, never wanting her back.
This was definately relatable, anyone who's been broken up with knows the feeling that they've lost their will to live, they've lost everything they cared about, everything they needed.
Great job, keep writing.
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| rust phoenix chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Very real and emotional. I can really connect with this. Your style suits the poem and the honesty comes through. "i let you go/
and you went places you'll never let me see." It's a simple way of putting things that somehow says so much more than it would have if you'd spent too much time expanding the thought and making it more complicated. I love the third stanza especially.
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
that was amazing, jess. i absolutely loved this. lovely poem, darling.
| no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
I like the idea of someone being someone else's breath, and also the silver lining line. Hmm. Relatable. Keep writing! :)
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
it's a great poem, everybody who has got a breakup could relate to this.