Reviews for Zafiros
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Very bittersweet piece. I love how you described your love and everything else. In the beginning, especially you had some gramamr/tense issues, but other than that I think is one of your bests.
socks-lost chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
I really like this. It so beautifully written and just great. Its really sad and heart breaking. Well anywayz good job keep it up!
Qzie chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
When I first saw the title, I thought, that sounds oddly familiar. Then I realized that I saw it on an etymology website as a root word for sapphire. Nice choice of title.

This is heartbreakingly beautiful. It's got that "you never know what you got until it's got" feeling going on, and at first I thought that the speaker's friend just left... but by the end, it was clear that the speaker's friend died... did I get that right?

As a final note, I like how you worked in jewels at the end, it tied everything up nicely. :) Chat later. -Qzie