hm... i wonder if there was a guy like that that existed. loved the fluff, a bit different but really nice. :) i wish you put another quirk for stephanie, aside from the gray and black ensembles, never-been-kissed, the same goes for terry. :)

This is really cute, and different, and beautiful, and awesome, and every other positive adjective you can think of. Thanks for posting! You're a great writer! ]

I love it. Thankyou for sharing.

holy crap, you TOTALLY drew me in! such a beautiful oneshot, i'm terribly sad there isn't more!

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aw! seriously the cutest story ever :]

-Natalia.

This is a perfect, beautiful story. Well done.

Great story. I love the characters. The ending was perfect.

That's so, so sweet. I love the way he thinks about her being like a tragic old movie star. I wish my first kiss had been like that.

I love this! It just made my day ...I really think you should make this into a story, that would be really awsome xD

-Love Laura

Ok...so I know that this was like forever ago...BUT! I was majorly wandering if you could make a number 2 to this? They're such different people...that seeing them intimately (if you know what I mean ;)) would really be something to read...think about it? thanks!

oh my gosh, all of your stories are amazing, and i think, how do you come up with this?

i really enjoyed the characters in this and the title really drew me into this story. it's very original.

nice work.

This made me smile. I thought the characterization was a little odd...things didn't make sense...but it was sweet.

I LOVE IT:D

This is by far one of the best stories I've read on fiction press. I really love reading stories from the guy's view but no one writes them that way, its always from a whiny teenage girl view. Alright,n no I'm going to read the rest of your stories.

This was really good. I thought at the beginning that the 'beautiful one' would be Bridget's sister-and I was right!

Thank you for writing this.

FT