LOVED IT

it was a perfect one-shot(:

you are an awesome writer! :)

I loved this! Really sweet :)

Dear Quill-and-Blood

I'd just like to say that I love your story!

Honestly. I was just enraptured of your one-shot through out

the whole story, and I gotta say - I'm envious. Green with envy. I mean, how can you WRITE like that? All I can say is 'Watch out!' You'll be hearing from me often, after I devour your other stories (:

Kudos to you, mate! Hahaha -

From, your rambling fan!

Excellent oneshot :D I thought the ending was fine, and I really liked the two main characters. Keep up the good work!

that was adorable! reading stories in the guy's point of view is surprisingly refreshing and enjoyable. please continue to write :)

High school clichés are the best, aren't they?

*sigh*

that was the cutest story i've ever read

:D

it'd be really cool if you created a story from this one-shot.

anyway

i thoroughly enjoyed it

:D:D:D

This is really really sweet!

Happy belated sweet sixteen!

This one shot was really cute and sweet...j'adore. Great job!

swet, :D

Very nicely done.

You write very well for a sixteen-year old. I felt like I was reading one of my classmate's stories from our Fiction Workshop-and that's a four-hundred level class. :)

I loved your main character's inner dialogues.

WHE! Hehe, I love it _

TOTALLY AWSOME!

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Terrence...what a character! lol.