Reviews for Old World Charm |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute...I really needed that...good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw...! I LOVE this. It's adorable and made me grin :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the whole idea of the bad boy falling for the innocent young girl. Quite a lot of swear words though, maybe a bit too much. Question: if she's such a loner type, why does she go to football games and Halloween dances? I certainly wouldn't go just for my sister. Pretty good one shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! tht was to cute! so adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Adorable! I loved every breathing moment of it! Your stories are so good... I'm so jealous. Maybe you could check out my oneshot someday? i plan on writing a long story soon. I've written before, on Fanfiction dot net but this is different and I'm terrified. Anwyays your story is brilliant and it's definitely going on my favorite's list. How do you do it? I hope you write another story soon! I'm hooked. ~LaughingWaterSpirit~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. ] Happy belated belated belated birthday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great! Cliche, but completely different all at the same time! Very well written as well. Thank You! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love i love i love! DD i wish you could make this into a story.. p oh, and i just put up a new story.. and i was wondering if you could check it out? i would really appreciate some feedback from you! D thanks! -russlove |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an incredibly well written and amazingly sweet story. You are a fantastic writer, you should definitely keep it up. I was really impressed with your ability to create such in depth, interesting characters in such a short space. Haha, it definitely keeps me wishing to know more about Steph and Terry. |
![]() ![]() this chapter literally made me smile. oh man, thats a girl's dreamboy for sure. keep updating. your stories are fabulous. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh God! I loved it D You should continue D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy belated birthday, first off! Secondly, this was too darn cute for its own good! I know what it feels like to be in the shadow of a sister. It SUCKS, and nobody ever understands that. The first words out of anyone's mouth when I tell them who my sister is are, "You're her sister? No way!" It's disgusting. But this made me feel better. Yay for theraputic reading! |
![]() ![]() Really good story! Absolutely love Terry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is going great right now. I loved your other story and I really hope this ones just as good. I love the whole shy vibe that you gave Steph. xclarissamariex |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, that was really good! bravo. can't wait for your next story! |