You really have nothing to worry about. You are an excellent writer. Please continue writing.

Hey.

First of all, Happy birthday! :D Hope you had a good one! I wish you every happiness. Secondly, this story is cute, and how one wishes it would happen to her. :D Awesome writing as per usual, le sigh, I should really start writing my own, damn you and your unintentional pulling of me to writing. :D

Redenzione.