Reviews for Alone
theeighthhouse chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
i like how this is structured, like someone is telling this to me in a short film, but there are parts that sound unsophisticated...i think you should read this out loud to yourself or have someone read it to you to check for any parts that need smoothing out and such. also, i think you should know that you 'lose' someone, and you don't 'loose' things.