Reviews for The King
JenniVu chapter 23 . 2/7/2009
OMG! I wanna know whats gonna happen in the end! Will they fall in love? Will she go back to Zach? Kill she kill the king?
JenniVu chapter 11 . 2/7/2009
The brother is having sex with Tracy...Kind've weird don't you think?
JenniVu chapter 6 . 2/7/2009
"As Gavin had instructed, Ashlee returned to her private chambers earlier than anyone else that evening. If Gavin wished to see her that evening, he would call for her without a doubt. Once she reached her room, she was pleased to see Tracy's familiar face standing just beside her doorway in the hall. "Tracy," she acknowledged with her first smile of the evening." When you wort that part, it said Ashlee, I was really confused so then I read the next paragraph and it was supposed to be Ana, but when I read the end of this chapter it said "Call for Ashlee" Who the hell is Ashlee?
JenniVu chapter 5 . 2/7/2009
Kyle is so polite! Hes 5, my little sister is 6 and shes CRAZY! I don't think I'm as polite as that - Don't think I'm rude becasue I have manners, just not like kyle-
JenniVu chapter 3 . 2/7/2009
I cried at every chapter so far! Soo sad!
JenniVu chapter 2 . 2/7/2009
I swear, this is THE best story I've EVER read. And let me tell you, I've read like BILLIONS of stories!
JenniVu chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
I love it! You wouldn't know how much! I bet you Ana is going to be in a arranged marriage with either the king or the prince...But I'm just guessing that!
Fayre Meira chapter 28 . 1/30/2009
who the hell is ashlee,his concubine or his other wife? typical kings - having lots of women. I dont particularly like it, sorry to say.
Peachie Miss chapter 28 . 1/19/2009
Aww, it's over and I can't believe it! Thank you for this wonderful story, I am so happy to have kept up with it from the beginning(or close) to the end. It was throughly enjoyed. Now then.

I'm happy for Gavin, he woke up! I was worried for a moment there, that'd she'd be dreaming or something, but she wasn't, so that's even better. I feel bad for Zachary, this just wasn't his happy ending, but eh, out of sight, out of mind. ;; Cameron! I could see him popping back up, possibly still holding that grudge, especially if their kids did become friends. But! Maybe not. And go Tracy! She's working it out, even if it didn't go the way she wanted. But all's well that ends well, or something, right? Thanks for the awesome story, I'll be keeping an eye out for you guys!
callalilly chapter 28 . 1/19/2009

I reviewed the earlier chapters but got very lazy, but I've read The King faithfully. It's the deepest, most realistic story I've seen on fp, if realistic makes sense. That is, I can picture it in my mind as a book on a shelf.

It was a great story, fully of suspense and tears, love and sadness that was deep and forceful.

I really enjoyed the story.
JtheChosen1 chapter 28 . 1/18/2009
excellent story! truly a great piece of literature!
axiden chapter 28 . 1/18/2009
Big round of applause! I love your story so much! Been reading it when you guys first upload the 1st chapter! Keep up the good work on the other stories!
SammehJo chapter 28 . 1/18/2009
that was a great story!

SammehJo chapter 27 . 1/11/2009
ahh I want more! lol

Peachie Miss chapter 27 . 1/10/2009
Oh my goodness!

*peeps through her fingers* Is it over yet?

This is amazingly suspenseful. I didn't think I liked Gavin THAT much, but I really, really don't want him to die. D: For a second, I was sure Ana was going to dive between them, but noo, she's on the other side of the room. xD And poor they're both looking at each other crazy. Well, now I really can't wait to see what happens next!
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