Reviews for The King
VeronaBlood chapter 27 . 1/10/2009
intriguing chapter update soon
JtheChosen1 chapter 27 . 1/9/2009
Holy cow...this chapter was magnificently written! Very intense and fast-paced! I had to read it twice just to take in the full effect! Great job as always!
kahxoxo chapter 26 . 1/4/2009
ok cameron is starting to get on my nerves. like come on his grudge is making me mad. and i hope zachary loves ana enough to let her go cause personally i love the King. i think him and anna are perfect. their chemestry is amazing and i love the personalities and character changes you have given them. PLEASE, PLEASE i beg you do NOT kill him!
poohbear512862 chapter 26 . 1/3/2009
I enjoy this story. Does Ana love Zach or Gavin more because it isn't directly stated
SammehJo chapter 26 . 1/3/2009
ooh exciting!

Peachie Miss chapter 26 . 1/2/2009
O sheet! He's going to make things complicated now, isn't he? *sigh* And just when everybody was getting along too...So is Zach gonna try to convince her, and Gavin walk in? Or maybe he'll hide and try to do it himself, and Ana will have to fess up about Zach. Which would then lead to the plot to kill Gavin... I'd like to think we're nearing the end, but it seems there's quite a few rounds of fireworks to go through yet, huh? Looking forward to the next chap!
JtheChosen1 chapter 26 . 1/2/2009

...a lot is about to happen...and frankly, I'm beyond excited for all of it!

Excellent chapter!
michelle chapter 25 . 1/1/2009
good chapter
JtheChosen1 chapter 25 . 12/30/2008
very excellent work! now that Travis is born, and Tracy knows that Ana can't follow through with their plans, what on earth will happen? Will Ana tell Gavin of his assasination? I can't wait!
SammehJo chapter 25 . 12/29/2008
Awesome story! :o)

Can't wait for more!

ella chapter 25 . 12/28/2008
i love this story!
ella chapter 25 . 12/28/2008
i love your story!
angeleyes chapter 25 . 12/27/2008
great story. keep it going. update real soon.
raped by a female bunni chapter 24 . 12/24/2008
yah! gavin forgave her... update soon!
Verisimility chapter 24 . 12/22/2008
In the beginning, I was willing to keep on reading...but if the story goes on like this much longer I may stop. With every chapter I get sicker and sicker at this's so extremely sexist it's disgusting. Maybe poly people might enjoy this story...but I sure don't, not the way it's going. HOW can she love this guy that hasn't changed since the beginning of the story...he's still a complete and utter douche. It doesn't make sense unless she's being brainwashed. And the mistresses! What the hell...all this story is about is how all women should be married, and it doesn't really matter who, as long as the men are happy and the women are pregnant 24/7. YAY FOR BREEDING.
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