Reviews for The King
JtheChosen1 chapter 24 . 12/22/2008
excellent chapter! Ana is facing quite the problem with Gavin, let us see what happens from it!
raped by a female bunni chapter 23 . 12/19/2008
omg, u have no idea as to how much i yearned for her to fall for gavin! * does victory dance around the room* update soon cause i will be waiting...
Peachie Miss chapter 23 . 12/13/2008
Lol, are you kidding me? Hello Pot? This is Kettle. Yeah. Poor Ana, she got found out, and ended up having to defend herself. And now she's stuck in her room til the baby comes. It'd be just what Gavin should get if it were a girl...but that'd probably just put Ana in more trouble. xP I wonder if Gavin will be curious about his competition...looking forward to the next chapter!
JtheChosen1 chapter 23 . 12/12/2008
quite possibly one of the most intense chapters written thus far! very good work!
MidnyghtVampyrezz chapter 21 . 12/2/2008
I love it and cannot wait for the next update
futureauthor852 chapter 21 . 11/30/2008
Oh, the king is acting so so nice, it will be really hard for ana to kill him. I wonder if she will truely do that dreaded task?
MidnyghtVampyrezz chapter 20 . 11/28/2008
I absolutly love it but I thought gavin should have seen ana and zach embarcing so he could get a taste of his own medicine. While I feel for kayla and Ashlee I want them gone. That sounds so mean by its how I feel. So I love it and can't wait for the next update
Sel chapter 1 . 11/26/2008

You two must really love these names

They're in Ana and Zach

and this story...
Peachie Miss chapter 20 . 11/25/2008
What bad timing for Gavin to be a pain in the butt. xD I'm glad Kyle is coming around though. I can only wonder what happens next...continue soon please!
futureauthor852 chapter 20 . 11/24/2008
very good chapter, but i really can't wait ot know whether she does go through with killing the king or not! update soon...~angela
Peachie Miss chapter 19 . 11/16/2008
Wow, what a chapter! I felt so bad for Anna and Zachary, I could've teared up! In other words, you guys are amazing. And now she, that's gonna be a chip on her shoulder for the next 9 months...

Hah, for a minute, I though Ana would be getting her own 'alternative attention'*winkwink nudgenudge* But if the king ever got wind of that, whoa, would it be off with their heads or what?

So I wonder, is she going to try to keep making progress with him, or will she stop...or is he the one who's going to try some more? And will she be receptive? So many questions! I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work!

And in response to your reply, not at all! ((Though it seems Tracy's quite willing to overlook his faults o.O))I'm glad someone can shake hands with me on something! xD
futureauthor852 chapter 19 . 11/15/2008
I applaud this chapter, as Ana and Zachery finally got together in more ways than one ;), update soon! ~Angela
PJC Macall chapter 18 . 11/10/2008
Love it!

please continue!
Inko chapter 18 . 11/8/2008
geyy great story you guys

but to be honest the comeron tracy relationship scares me a bit.

I mean his soo controling and shes soo weak and sweet and nice and valunarable

but i guess it makes the sotry interesting..and also the thought of them being siblings is a bit desturbing

but i know that at those times it was normal.

Cant wait for the next chapter

And I cant wait how the zach ( if he attends the ball) thing will turn out.. i mean will Gavin notice it or not..

will he be jelouse

will he finally find the reaosn for her NOT loving him etc.

So like Ive said before great story and keep up the good work

lots of love
futureauthor852 chapter 18 . 11/8/2008
wow...this is sad, and I wonder if Zachery will attend the ball. Update soon please...~angela
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