Reviews for Beautiful Bruises
Edgar Wellington chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
This poem intrigues me, but I am not exactly sure why. It seems a bit overdone and not especially rhythmic or lyric. I might guess that the marriage of Earth and Sky is a clever allusion to Blake's Marriage of Heaven and Hell. Well, I like it. "lovesmith" is the kind of word that I want to store away and use in some future piece, it evokes both something about the character using it as well as the character it describes...
lymli chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
this sentence:

For the marriage of Earth and Sky was only

A poor lovesmith’s dream.

it's great, good poem.