Reviews for Purity
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
I liked this.
WhiteInkDrop chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Simply one word: wonderful.
Bavand chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
Man, darlin! More fantastic weaving of imagery and metaphors. I love "Sanctify every stained perception" and "Smash my sin-baked bricks", the real kicker that catches your heart are the last 2 lines of forming beauty from brokenness. It's a very poetic statement of faith.

Julie
WonderWing chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
I'm not one for freestyles, lemme say.

This poem made me wonder, how can you ever be pure when you think of yourself as being so filthy? But I suppose that is the first step to a change, is to admit that there is a problem. Where does the change occur though, when do we transition from thinking one way to being another way?

That's what this poem got me thinking about.
FightForYourself chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Ohh really pretty in a dark morbid way O.o.. Reminds me of how I was 3 years ago.. ::fav!::